I write about my family,my name is Alvaro and I am twelve years old. My brother`s name Carlos and he is fifteen years old. My mather`s name Isabel and she is forty four years old she is of Ceuta. My father`s name Manuel and he is bold,he is forty five years old. I´ve got two uncles:Nuria and Esther. I´ve got one pet,a cat.
I´ve got five counsins:Laura,Tamara,Sergio and Paula. This is my FAMILY!!!
Hi Álvaro! I'm your teacher.It is a very good idea to write in your blog.Some things to consider: To say one person's town or country,use 'from' and not 'of'.Your MOTHER,not MATHER is FROM Ceuta,not OF Ceuta.Calvo is bald,not bold.'Your brother name IS Carlos', 'Your father's name IS Manuel'
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